English Writing - Section C

Text: Mazlina binti Omar


Written by: Hani, Umairah and Natrah

       Last Saturday, the scouts of Bedong Primary School went for a camping .They were camping in the forest .They felt very eager and exuberant. 

       They were divided into two groups .Their scout master gave them their task. Amin and Aiman  were collecting firewood to cook their scrumptious food for lunch. Meanwhile, Ahmad and Amir pitched up the tent as place for them to sleep.

      After a few days , they pack their things and cleaned their campsite .They felt over the moon and elated because they spent precious bonding time together.


Checked by: Examiner

       Last Saturday, the scouts of Bedong Primary School went for a camping .They were camping in the forest .They felt very eager and exuberant.
(Good - 24 words)

       They were divided into two groups .Their scout master gave them their tasks. Amin and Aiman  were collecting firewood to cook their scrumptious food for lunch. Meanwhile, Ahmad and Amir pitched up the tent for a place for them to rest and sleep. 
(Good - 43 words)

      After a few days , they packed their things and cleaned their campsite .They felt over the moon and elated because they spent precious bonding time together. 
(Good - 26 words)

                                                                                                                                             
93 words